It needs a melody
There's nothing wrong with what you have so far; it's just that, without anything for the listener to latch on to, it's a little dull. I get that it started out as trance, but even a trance song should have something melodic on top. Otherwise it sounds great. Maybe you have too many effects, but it's hard for me to judge.
I know it needs a melody, I just hit producer's block I guess.
I'm me. What else would I put here? I make music. Sometimes. I mean, I can't make music all of the time. Even if I did it professionally -- which, mind you, I don't -- I would still have to eat and sleep and so forth. So, you know, sometimes. Yeah...
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